The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a very interesting story. The MC's voice is strong, and the message is just right.
05/08/08
Superb job with the teenage voice. I work with teens, and this is exactly the way they write.
Well done, I loved how you explained how your characters received their comfort and how you carried it on to the dad's.

Your title worked for me as well.

Keep up the good words!