The Official Writing Challenge
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Interesting approach to the topic. The MC certainly did some "Mothering" of these boys. Wonderful writing!
Awww! This left a wonderful warm feeling. I liked this story and though a tad predictable, it was very enjoyable. I really liked how she had them all start playing basketball, etc. I could see much more happening in this little world. Very nice! ^_^
A very readable and good story. I like the way the writer has brought in a long time perspective into this little under 700 word story. perhaps a little more of dialogues could make it livelier. But on the whole it is an appealing piece!