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What a nice lesson, though difficult, to teach on the real meaning of Easter. You portrayed a child's innocense in a true way; it was believable. I enjoyed it very much.
Good job! I've read a number of articles stressing the pagan roots of the Easter celebration, but they all came off as being judgemental. But this was approached in a loving manner and like words seasoned with grace. Thanks.
Very good lesson for Madge to teach her daughter and for me as I didn't know about the connection between bunnies and the Norse tradition. Thanks for sharing.
Very nice. I liked that Mum told her to talk to Jesus about it! What a great example that is!!!
Interesting story with a lesson being taught to the youngster. A tip: break your dialog into individual paragraphs. Also, the tense shift in the early paragraphs detracted from story a bit.