The Official Writing Challenge
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Beautiful and held my attention to the end.

This is a very touching piece. Well written. Good God message for all of us.
Well-written eye-opening piece. Warm wishes, Joanne
I really liked this. You write as if from personal experience.
This was a really catchy title that got my interest immediately - and it did not disappoint. It was an intriguing piece and left me wanting to know what the future holds for Goldie and her family.
This was a great story..and great title to go with it. God bless you.
This was great, Lois. I'm sorry I missed reading it in my first run through of stories. A well deserved win. You are awesome!
Lois, congratulations on placing 1st in the Editors' Choice Challenge, as well as 1st in the Intermediate Level. It was a very large field of entries, so this is really a credit to you. Make sure you get your release into FaithWriter so that this wonderful story can go into the next book (if you haven't already done so). Also, with a win like this, it's time to move up to the Advanced Level. Again, very well done. With love, Deb
Well derserved win!
Thanks for sharing.
It is abundantly clear how you placed first. This is a terrific and touching story. Your characters are more alive than I was ready to accept. Now I must go catch my breath. Congrats! -Jeremy McNabb
Wow! Powerful stuff. It captivated my attention