The Official Writing Challenge
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01/24/05
Beautiful and held my attention to the end.

Kathy
This is a very touching piece. Well written. Good God message for all of us.
01/24/05
Well-written eye-opening piece. Warm wishes, Joanne
01/25/05
I really liked this. You write as if from personal experience.
01/28/05
This was a really catchy title that got my interest immediately - and it did not disappoint. It was an intriguing piece and left me wanting to know what the future holds for Goldie and her family.
This was a great story..and great title to go with it. God bless you.
This was great, Lois. I'm sorry I missed reading it in my first run through of stories. A well deserved win. You are awesome!
01/31/05
Lois, congratulations on placing 1st in the Editors' Choice Challenge, as well as 1st in the Intermediate Level. It was a very large field of entries, so this is really a credit to you. Make sure you get your release into FaithWriter so that this wonderful story can go into the next book (if you haven't already done so). Also, with a win like this, it's time to move up to the Advanced Level. Again, very well done. With love, Deb
01/31/05
Well derserved win!
Thanks for sharing.
01/31/05
It is abundantly clear how you placed first. This is a terrific and touching story. Your characters are more alive than I was ready to accept. Now I must go catch my breath. Congrats! -Jeremy McNabb
Wow! Powerful stuff. It captivated my attention