The Official Writing Challenge
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05/02/08
That was very sad. I'm glad there was some redemption in the line, "Thank you for trying, you did your best." Sometimes I think belittling is the worst form of abuse.
05/04/08
Oh, there are so many who suffered their parent's mothering style. It really hurts, and it's so good God enables us to break the cycle.
05/06/08
Oooh, sad. It flowed very well though! I liked this verse the most:

"Her child was dying, His life He gave
His mother waited she could not save"

Very nicely done! ^_^