The Official Writing Challenge
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05/02/08
That was very sad. I'm glad there was some redemption in the line, "Thank you for trying, you did your best." Sometimes I think belittling is the worst form of abuse.
05/04/08
Oh, there are so many who suffered their parent's mothering style. It really hurts, and it's so good God enables us to break the cycle.
Oooh, sad. It flowed very well though! I liked this verse the most:

"Her child was dying, His life He gave
His mother waited she could not save"

Very nicely done! ^_^