The Official Writing Challenge
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05/02/08
How blessed you are to have precious memories of your mother!

A few suggestions: Rather than put each sentence on a separate line, group them into paragraphs for better flow. And since Challenge entries are supposed to be anonymous, if that's your real name at the end, you'll want to omit it from future entries.

Lots of touching emotions in this sweet entry with an important message.
05/06/08
Lots going on here, especially with the letter/memory format! thanks for sharing, it was good! ^_^