The Official Writing Challenge
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05/02/08
Love the story of the money tree! That could almost be expanded to be the whole story, with more dialogue and more characterization; it was quite charming.

A note: "enormity" does not mean "large size or amount"--it means "great evil." Like We may never know the enormity of Hitler's deeds. It's a very common misconception.

I like the prayers in the middle and the end, a nice touch.
05/06/08
It's so sad that the MC never quite felt the acceptance from her mother, and that, due to dementia, that might never happen. Lovely prayers for the mother.