The Official Writing Challenge
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05/02/08
This first part of this really amde me grin, because I thought I was the only person in the world who adored freah new school supplies!

This is a good object lesson. Suggestion: break your long paragraphs into shorter, more digestible chunks.

Good job.
A very enjoyable read. I like the theme of "color" throughout. Good job!
05/03/08
Your line "splashed the canvas of my life with God made hues" delighted me both in the extended metaphor of color-art and in the deep love you have for your son.