The Official Writing Challenge
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05/03/08
Sad and beautiful...this spoke to me. I loved the repetition throughout, drawing me down the stanzas...to "victory". Lovely.
Thanks for the hint or I would have missed this touching tribute.

Your title is perfect.
Keep up the good words.

05/07/08
Great job here! I loved the first verse best of all, you did well with the flow and the story idea woven throughout. I especially liked your title, it's another reminder that even through death, can come hope and something new, bringing victory! Excellent job! ^_^
05/07/08
Lovely - and isn't that the way it happens sometimes? Enjoyed this piece, and gave me much to ponder.
05/07/08
Perfect tribute. Incredible parallel between this mother's death and what it accomplished to that of Jesus' victory over death. Well done.
05/08/08
Love the pattern of using the second lines to begin the next verses. It works very well in this poem, seeming to emphasise the direction of the thought.