The Official Writing Challenge
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Sad and beautiful...this spoke to me. I loved the repetition throughout, drawing me down the "victory". Lovely.
Thanks for the hint or I would have missed this touching tribute.

Your title is perfect.
Keep up the good words.

Great job here! I loved the first verse best of all, you did well with the flow and the story idea woven throughout. I especially liked your title, it's another reminder that even through death, can come hope and something new, bringing victory! Excellent job! ^_^
Lovely - and isn't that the way it happens sometimes? Enjoyed this piece, and gave me much to ponder.
Perfect tribute. Incredible parallel between this mother's death and what it accomplished to that of Jesus' victory over death. Well done.
Love the pattern of using the second lines to begin the next verses. It works very well in this poem, seeming to emphasise the direction of the thought.