The Official Writing Challenge
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05/03/08
This story provides the essential message suitable for a gospel piece to the young or very young. The focus, IMHO, however is on Jesus, which title is suitably named, but not the mother, which theme is what this writing challenge is about, other than the fact she is the one leading the child in the first steps to eternity sealed.
05/06/08
What an important lesson this mom gave her son in this story. She is setting a good example for all moms.
05/06/08
This is the best gift a mother can give to her child. The last paragraph is nice, but the tone of it is completely diferent than the rest. If you change the voice used in it, or leave it off, this would be like a Sunday School take home paper. She's a very wise mother who will take the time and talk about spiritual matters with her children.