The Official Writing Challenge
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04/25/08
Great voice and deep emotions all the way through. You made the aunt so very real. Except for a few minor technical errors, this was written very well!!
04/26/08
This is wonderful. I loved how you used the dialog and the honesty there. So good. And the grandmother's admonishment was excellent--something we all need to hear.
04/26/08
A very sweet story, but it needs some editing; practice makes perfect my mother always said...so keep at it.
05/01/08
Congratulations on your Highly Commended. Nice job with the topic.