The Official Writing Challenge
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04/26/08
This captivated me and I really enjoyed it. I loved the picture of Theo sprawled in his chair and your aunt bursting out. A very enjoyable read!
Excellent vivid descriptions that place your reader in the scene. Nice job!
05/01/08
Congratulations on your 2nd place. Your descriptive phrases are very good. Nice job with the topic.
05/05/08
Cat - this is a wonderful article. Your descriptions are so vivid. I love this line:I drank her in like a starving person. Great writing. Congratulations and thank you for your kind words on my article. Love in Christ,

Julia