The Official Writing Challenge
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04/26/08
What a story! I love how you wove the lesson into the story--it packs a punch. Good job!
04/27/08
You have some powerful images in here: the tent heaving like it's breathing, the grip of grace, and the sentence about seeing her father's face in her son. Good imagery in your title too. The two sisters' children were the black sheep -- no Moabite or Ammonite allowed in the assembly of the Lord (Deut. 23:3)
05/01/08
Congratulations on your Highly Commended. Very good POV, and nice job with the topic.