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06/06/05
Lovely touching story!
Beautiful ending! "Very Nicely Done!"
06/06/05
Wow! You took a beautiful legend and put flesh on it. Thanks for emphasizm on life out of the mouth of death. The real joy of the Easter message. "Though he be dead, yet shall he live."
Very touching piece. We celebrate life even in death. The sight of the dogwood tree reminded you of His love.
06/08/05
Very touching indeed, well done.
06/08/05
A witness to the amazing way grace cradles grief.
06/08/05
A very touching piece.
I lost my own father at Easter time. Thank you for this lovely story. Very touching.
I liked your story. I thought you could have put more into the paragraph when you asked, "Lord, why did he have to die today?" Great question. Connecting your father-in-law's death with Jesus death and ressurection at that moment would have really grabbed you reade. I felt I was with you in the car. Great job.