The Official Writing Challenge
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The story about the coals, was very clever and I loved the point you made. The ending was too military for me, after reading such a creative first part.
A creative idea using the bonfire and the individual coals falling away. Your point was well made and we have to be ready for His call.
Yes, the personification and symbolic language makes this a very enjoyable piece.
Very interesting piece, quite unique.
What a unique perspective. I liked your use of coal in your article. It was effective. Good job.
Nice story. I loved your creative thoughts. Such an unique story needs a unique title.