The Official Writing Challenge
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06/07/05
The story about the coals, was very clever and I loved the point you made. The ending was too military for me, after reading such a creative first part.
06/08/05
A creative idea using the bonfire and the individual coals falling away. Your point was well made and we have to be ready for His call.
06/08/05
Yes, the personification and symbolic language makes this a very enjoyable piece.
06/08/05
Very interesting piece, quite unique.
What a unique perspective. I liked your use of coal in your article. It was effective. Good job.
Nice story. I loved your creative thoughts. Such an unique story needs a unique title.