The Official Writing Challenge
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Loved the feel of this, the dialect is right on.

One thing, I think Aunt Lil changed to Aunt Molly.

Our family comes together like this over food and you made me feel right at home.
Keep up the good words.
04/25/08
This is full of flavor. I liked it.
04/27/08
Enjoyed reading the dialogue. I always enjoy a solid feel good story as well, especially about country folk.