The Official Writing Challenge
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Loved the feel of this, the dialect is right on.

One thing, I think Aunt Lil changed to Aunt Molly.

Our family comes together like this over food and you made me feel right at home.
Keep up the good words.
This is full of flavor. I liked it.
Enjoyed reading the dialogue. I always enjoy a solid feel good story as well, especially about country folk.