The Official Writing Challenge
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04/25/08
What a wonderful tribute to your aunt! I liked how you wove in asking your mom if you could do it that way at your house--it added sparkle to this account.
04/29/08
What a fun read--this caught my interest from the beginning and held it to the end. Moms are like that, yeah, they are!
05/01/08
Congratulations on your 3rd place. This was an enjoyable read. I really liked the voice. And I liked the repetition of the little girl asking her mom why their house couldn't be the same as Aunt Alice's house. Nice job with the topic.