The Official Writing Challenge
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04/17/08
Oh my, those last 3 lines are beautiful, and I did not expect them. Lots of transparent emotion in this poem, beautifully written.
04/17/08
wonderful poem, brought tears to my eyes, well written.
04/17/08
Amazing writing. At the end, that moment of clarity became a moment of charity.
How well your poem describes the effects of stroke, both in the time leading up to, and in the after-effects. So many times we don't understand what is happening inside someone else - the anger comes first, and the loss comes later. God bless you.
04/22/08
So much emotion here...very well done. The ending is superb.
04/23/08
A moving, beautiful poem.