The Official Writing Challenge
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04/18/08
Wow, this is a very creative and well-written satire. Right on point.

I'm afraid it's not really on topic, but I enjoyed it immensely. You have a refreshing and unique writing style.
04/19/08
Wow! Now that's creative!! Once I understood what was going on I really enjoyed it. We have something similar going on in our church--minus the bans and bickering. Super creative!!
04/21/08
Well said, well written. Can you imagine this entry as a Christian Reality show on TV?
04/21/08
Even though it's not on topic, this is a really clever, creative and thought-provoking piece. Definitely can see this performed or published. Well done. I know God will be glorified over and over again with this.
04/21/08
Despite not being on topic, this is SO well done. The creativity is awesome, and it's very well written. Kudos.
04/21/08
Great message in a very creative package. Good job.
04/21/08
What a wonderful message and so unique. Great opening paragraph and the rest did not disappoint. Love the writing style.
04/21/08
How absolutely creative and out-of-the box. Well done, I loved it.
04/22/08
This was a great idea. While it may not speak the topic loud and clear, the writing itself should not go unrecognized, because it is wonderful.

Tim, I really enjoy your entries each week, because you always bring something new and exciting to the table. Whether you place with this one or not, I appreciate you sharing it. :)
04/23/08
So creative! Love the PRAZORS and the WORSHIPPURRZ. I got a bit lost in the groups outside who were picketing. This had a Bill and Ted feel to it to me for some reason, maybe it was the battle and the fog. Keep up the good words.
04/23/08
Oh how fun! I can see this as being a longer story! I loved the sayings in bold for the two-sided signs and especially how they all became 'one' at the end through laughter. Great job-this is fresh and with a good message. ^_^
04/23/08
This is written in a very clever way with a great message. Well done.