The Official Writing Challenge
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04/17/08
You wrote about several interesting fathers, so you're very strong on topic--well done!

A few suggestions: This may be a bit rambling--maybe you could pick one of those men and write more in depth about him to add focus to this piece? Two red pen edits: I think you meant "eccentric" rather than "exocentric", and "Bible" is always capitalized.

Your writing shows considerable potential.
04/19/08
I enjoyed hearing about your son and your husband. What a special time that must have been.