The Official Writing Challenge
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04/17/08
I like the nostalgic feel to this.

It did feel as if it jumped around a bit--maybe a few less incidents, but examined in more depth, would give this piece greater flow.

Pop was an interesting and complex character!
04/18/08
I love the old stories--traveling in a car. A great place to bond.

I agree, there was almost too much in the limited words here. I'd like to know more about fewer events.

Nice writing.
04/19/08
Wow. What a road trip!! Your dad sounds like an interesting man. I really enjoyed to voice and feel to this.