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06/06/05
Great example of the transforming work possible because of Easter. Our risen Lord empowers, transforms, sets us free to be all we were created to be. I was nearly 50 before He was able to convince me I was an eagle. The hard part was trusting Him enought to leave the "safety" of the nest. This really spoke to me. Thanks
This entry is really brilliant and the images are very poetic. You have shown us how trusting in the Lord can empower us and give us the wings of an eagle. Great piece.
06/08/05
You have a gift. Thank you for sharing.
06/08/05
A well-written peice. Read like a modern day story of Judas with a positive twist.
06/08/05
OOPS. Must have inadvertently hit the forward button. Sorry, the above comment was meant for one story back.
06/08/05
Very creative. Isaiah 40:31 -one of my very favorite verse :)
Very creative writing. I enjoyed the dialogue very much. The sparrow/eagle's insecurities were captured nicely. I especially liked when he began to spread his wings while still inside the tomb. It is true: light diffuses darkness and destroys our tombs, giving life where death once resided. I enjoyed this article very much. Eagles have always been a favorite with me. Thanks for sharing it.