The Official Writing Challenge
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An entertaining and delightful story of "Over across the street"...and I thoroughly enjoyed the trip.
It's wonderful how even though your grandfather didn't show much love or kindness, your step-grandmother compensated. I enjoyed your style of writing. Very real and personable. I felt as if you were sitting across from me telling the story directly to me.

I look forward to seeing more of your entries in the weeks to come. :)
I felt like I was sitting over a cup of coffee with you--very comfortable and personable.