The Official Writing Challenge
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04/10/08
When I first started reading this, I was sure that I would become disinterested quickly, but I kept on reading and was really drawn into this story. I really do look forward to meeting your grandmother in Heaven. Godbless you! And thanks for writing this.
I too enjoyed the article and learning about your Grandmother
and hearing of the way you and your sister found closure; I am sure it will be very different in time for your own grandchildren; probably you give them what you missed yourself.
"Today is the tomorrow you worried about yesterday."

I need to remember that line. :)

I enjoyed this glimpse into the life of your grandmother. I appreciate you sharing it.

The only suggestion I would make is to either omit the first two paragraphs talking about the challenge, or put them at the bottom as a footnote. Otherwise this is a great story.

Thank you for sharing.
04/13/08
Once past the first couple of paragraphs I thoroughly enjoyed this. What a wonderful woman of God she must've been.