The Official Writing Challenge
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Excellent, excellent writing. Very sharp. This flows nicely and you weave a beautiful picture of a grandmother's love (and a strained parent/child relationship). Nicely done!!
Excellent, excellent writing. Very sharp. This flows nicely and you weave a beautiful picture of a grandmother's love (and a strained parent/child relationship). Nicely done!!
A very well written and heartwarming story. Sometimes parents have a difficult time expressing their love for their children, but I am glad that this mother was able to do so in her own way.

You have great writing talent. I look forward to reading more of your entries. :)
04/13/08
This brought tears to my eyes. You did a great job conveying the tension as well as the emotions you felt. Good job!
04/17/08
Congratulations on your 3rd place. This is a beautiful piece. Nice job with the topic.