The Official Writing Challenge
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04/10/08
What a wonderful tribute. I loved this lesson: 'I have learned through his life that touching people’s lives does not have to be a major crisis, but you can change people with one act at a time as they enter your life.' Very good indeed.
04/12/08
Yours indeed is a 'lasting treasure' thanks for sharing such a wonderful story.

04/12/08
Thank you so much for sharing your grandparents with us. What a wonderful blessing you've been given to have such a family story!
"I have learned through his life that touching people's lives does not have to be a major crisis, but you can change people with one act at a time as they enter your life."

I loved that line. What a special tribute to your grandparents. I feel like I know them personally after reading this.

I look forward to seeing more entries from you. Keep up the great writing! :)
04/16/08
A little choppy with the flow, because of all the He's and Her's but a nice tribute story. A few missing words also, but we all have done that. Keep writing and practicing it gets better.