The Official Writing Challenge
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04/10/08
What a tremendous lesson this is!! This is a keeper, for sure. Well done.
04/11/08
A very nice metaphor that is cleansing in the telling. Very nice job.
I liked the lesson in this story and how it was presented. It is so true that even if we don't understand every scripture in the Bible, just the simple act of reading it can forever cleanse us and change our lives for the better.

Thank you for blessing me with this! Wonderful writing!
04/13/08
Nice metaphor, but I would have liked the grandmother to have used something to actually make reading the Bible or any book for that matter more interesting to a child. Maybe a Bible written for children. Writing overall was good.
04/15/08
A simple but effective lesson.
04/17/08
Congratulations on your 1st place. I love the lesson--grandmas are so good at that. Nice job with the topic.
04/22/08
There aren't words good enough to tell you how this article touched my heart!! What wonderful, timely wisdom the Lord has shared through you! Thank you and God bless!

Cherry Bieber