The Official Writing Challenge
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03/14/08
Your last 4 paragraphs were especially well done and heart-breaking.
03/14/08
Wow! What a lovely story, perfect for topic, beautiful descriptions, fantastic writing! This brought tears to my eyes, something very close to my heart!
03/15/08
I love how this story comes full circle. Beautifully descriptive and touching piece in so many ways. Lovely.
03/15/08
Such a touching story, and very well written. You lured me in with your Title, then kept me interested with your exquisite way with words and emotions. I enjoyed the read and, in my humble opinion, if you raise emotion in your reader - that's the sign of a good writer. And you did just that...Kudos!
03/18/08
Very well written! It's message is one we all need to hear again. It reminds me of the need to touch my kids more often. Very well done!