The Official Writing Challenge
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03/13/08
Scary prospect. Your writing so true to topic.
03/14/08
A chilling little glimpse into a possible future. Good job with the atmosphere of this story.

Take a look at this sentence:

Taking Stephen’s advice, the door finally gave way. It's written as if the door took Stephen's advice. Be careful of those misplaced modifiers!

I like the quiet moodiness here.

03/15/08
Excellent sense of place and atmosphere with this piece. Very haunting - you kept me on the edge of my seat, wondering where this was going. Very nicely done.
03/15/08
A sad look at a future that might be ours. "It Is Written"...and this was an insight into what may come. Nicely done and well written.
You paint this somber scene beautifully. I felt like I was walking the halls with them.
Sadly, many churches already water down the Gospel, portraying Christ as one of many ways to reach God.
03/20/08
Congratulations on your Highly Commended. This was a very creative take on the topic. Nice job.