The Official Writing Challenge
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03/14/08
So much encouragement here! Thanks!

Take a look at how many common expressions you have used in this poem. Is there a way that you could say the same thing, only with fresh ideas and images?

I like your title--it matches the mood of your poem perfectly.
03/15/08
Enjoyed the rhythm of this piece especially. Nicely done.