The Official Writing Challenge
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06/06/05
Excellent story telling! You really brought the story to life.
06/07/05
I liked the way you showed the importance of the words used. Christ spoke carefully and said exactly what He meant. Nice transistion from the dread of night to the joy of morning.
06/08/05
Interesting approach to the story.
I loved the beginning, and would have liked more desciption towards the end (as in the beginning). Thank you for this.
The turmoil the disciples must've experrienced on that dark day! What ecstacy they must've found themselves in when they witnessed for themselves the resurrection of our Lord. Your account of those three days was right on point. Nice job.
Joy does come in the morning. Nice ending.
You must have been there. You got to the heart of the matter. The dialogue and the emotions seemed very authentic. Excellent telling of this story.
This was very good. The emotions of each of the characters was very vivid. You ended it nicely with the real celebration! He IS alive!
06/13/05
Fantastic piece of writing with a lesson to apply every day: "joy comes in the morning!" Truly wonderful.