The Official Writing Challenge
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03/13/08
Beautiful, seamless transition from the present to the flashback and back again. I really love your approach to the topic.
03/15/08
This is wonderful - just right for the topic, and absolutely beautifully crafted and told. I hope this does well. Just lovely.
This is a delightful snapshot of a wonderful old/young-at-heart couple. I identified because I taught adjectives and adverbs for 37 years. You did a great job.
This is a delightful snapshot of a wonderful old/young-at-heart couple. I identified because I taught adjectives and adverbs for 37 years. You did a great job.
03/15/08
Oh! What a wonderful story! I don't even know why it was up on my computer but I read it anyway and so glad that I did! What great writing! And I love your title and just LOVE LOVE LOVE your ending!
Laury
03/16/08
Absolutely delightful! Loved this entry and written so eloquently! "Go John and Ellie, Go!" Riding the wind and enjoying life! What a neat, creative story! PLUS, it's right on target topic-wise! Kudos!
03/16/08
Very nice story & right on topic. If that is not the time to enjoy your life, when is?

Thanks for sharing.
03/20/08
Congratulations on your Highly Commended. This is a great example of the topic, and a wonderful lesson to all of us. Nice job.
12/31/08
Amanda, I've just come upon this story again, and I've decided to feature it in the Front Page Showcase for the week of January 5. Look for it on the FaithWriters home page, and congratulations!