The Official Writing Challenge
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An interesting concept. Perhaps a little close to mentioning the topic, perhaps simply an unusual treatment of the Subject. Keep writing. God bless you.
03/13/08
Great POV, and super use of repetition in the questions that start each paragraph.

Watch your use of dashes--they should be made of two hyphens, with no space before or after--just like this.

I wasn't expecting the ending, and enjoyed the growing realization.
03/14/08
I love the parallel structure of this, and the voice. This was a very, VERY enjoyable and convicting read. Nice job!
03/16/08
I had to read this twice in order to get the full impact of Who the writer was talking about. After the second read I marvel at the creativity of this piece. Masterful and meaningful! Great take on our topic this week. Lovely thoughts! Very impressive and creative! - and loved the briefness; short and to the point! Well done!
03/16/08
You accomplished much with relatively few words. Very creative idea and take on the topic. I am so glad He put down His tools!

Thanks for sharing this piece.