The Official Writing Challenge
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An interesting concept. Perhaps a little close to mentioning the topic, perhaps simply an unusual treatment of the Subject. Keep writing. God bless you.
Great POV, and super use of repetition in the questions that start each paragraph.

Watch your use of dashes--they should be made of two hyphens, with no space before or after--just like this.

I wasn't expecting the ending, and enjoyed the growing realization.
I love the parallel structure of this, and the voice. This was a very, VERY enjoyable and convicting read. Nice job!
I had to read this twice in order to get the full impact of Who the writer was talking about. After the second read I marvel at the creativity of this piece. Masterful and meaningful! Great take on our topic this week. Lovely thoughts! Very impressive and creative! - and loved the briefness; short and to the point! Well done!
You accomplished much with relatively few words. Very creative idea and take on the topic. I am so glad He put down His tools!

Thanks for sharing this piece.