The Official Writing Challenge
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Fantastic! I suspect this was written by Mel Gibson, so descriptive of the agony of His passion. The last line blew me away! You are blessed to have been gifted with the ability to make the horror and the wonder come alive within the mind of the reader. My heart broke anew.
Good descriptions. Made it very real.
Great descriptive work. The "Why" in the paragraph breaks adds to the dramatic and passion. Thank you.
I, too, liked the "why" breaks in your beautiful writing. Thank you.
Here, here. I thought the whys added drama to your article. It gave it a certain rhythm that served to carry the reader from moment to moment in the agony of our Lord. Loved the ending. Nicely done.
Very vivid picture of the agony that Christ suffered for us. Your entry was a good dramatization of the event.
I had chills from the vivid description. Nicely written
I really enjoyed this piece. It was very descriptive and dramatic. I loved the last line. It was the answer to all the "Whys," which is why I might have called it "The Answer."