The Official Writing Challenge
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This is one of my favorite Bible stories!

When re-telling Bible stories, consider taking a unique POV, or telling a prequel or sequel instead of just re-telling. I'll admit that I tended to skim this, as the story was very familiar to me.

You wrote very well, and nailed this week's topic perfectly.
I really like your title. I actually wrote on Ruth for last week's challenge - one of my favorite Bible stories.

A little bit of added characterization, or a different perspective on the story, might give this some more sparkle, make it "uniquely your own."

A great choice for the topic! Keep writing.