The Official Writing Challenge
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03/13/08
Isn't it funny how there are two types--those keenly aware of time and those not...I feel naked without my watch, and feel as if I'm wasting time without it.

Id like some more specific examples here, and perhaps a tad more focus. Watch for small typos, too.

I really had to smile at "cell phones are not what God intended". Gotta agree with you there!
03/14/08
I enjoyed this piece - much to ponder. I liked your tone especially. Keep writing!
03/15/08
Great start to this. I thought the scripture references before the quotes interrupted the flow a bit. Good message!