The Official Writing Challenge
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03/13/08
A candlelight choir concert sounds wonderful!

I'm not sure how this fits the topic, and I think I'd have liked a bit more character devolopment--I just felt like a distant observer of this one.

I'd love to be a part of a large choir some day--well, I guess we all will, won't we?
03/14/08
A lot of detail that many with musical background would really appreciate, I think. I would love to know more about the characters as well. I love the idea of a candlelight cantata. Thanks for sharing!
I'm glad they made hay learning their music well while the lights shown.

Though you illustrated the topic well, I, too, did not have a sense of connectedness to the story.

You painted beautifully the lovely ambiance of the candle-lit sanctuary.