The Official Writing Challenge
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03/13/08
Good visuals here. You painted a very clear picture - I could see the scene very well. Keep writing!
03/13/08
Sweet story--I could practicall smell the dirt and see the sunshine.

To be a really compelling short story, it needs a bit of conflict--nothing earth-shattering, but something to draw the reader along.

This fits the topic very well.
03/16/08
You did the "Title" proud, and nailed down the "Topic" to a "T" with this one. Could use a little dialogue, humor, or something to bring some "Oomph" to your story...but still, very well done! Keep writing for His Glory.