The Official Writing Challenge
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03/08/08
You entry hits the nail on the head, topic-wise; however, it rambles a bit and needs tightening up to make it flow more evenly for the Reader. A good story of how one can pick themselves up despite poverty and circumstances beyond their control. Keep at it - practice makes perfect!
03/09/08
I love the hope in this story, and your attitude. Keep sharing your writing for His glory!