The Official Writing Challenge
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03/06/08
Exceptional writing and excellent story! I love the subtle symbolism of how Marcy could also be a person, and how serving a new master who saves her brings hope. He leads me by the still waters, he restores my soul.
03/08/08
At first I thought Marcy was a person; then, of course, after a time I realized she was a horse - and such a sad beginning that turned into a beautiful green pasture in the end. Great writing, a wonderful story, and a delightful read! Thanks for this uplifting story (which was right on target, topic-wise) and...which I thoroughly enjoyed! Kudos!
03/08/08
Interesting take on topic, keep writing.
03/08/08
Very creative idea, the first story I've read from a horse's point of view. An enjoyable read.
03/09/08
Your descriptions are quite vivid, and I was very engaged. Wonderful storytelling here.
I loved your entry. Having horses of my own to love and care for, your story was a real blessing to me. Well done and well written.