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A touching story, and very well written. A writer that can bring laughter or tears from their readers (in my estimation), is a Writer that's going somewhere. Bringing out emotions is a #1 sign of a brilliant writer...and believe me, I wept. Good Job!
You did an amazing job with the descriptions on this piece - you definitely put me right there with you. The emotions are so clearly shown as well. This is just first rate, in my opinion.
Vivid descriptions and powerful emotions in this piece. Keep writing.
Very poetic and soulful. You touched me. Thanks for sharing.
Very touching story. Nicely written.
This was beautiful.
Amen, and AMEN. Wow, what a gift you have! This line tugged at my heart strings:
What started out as a small sacrifice of praise from a child had become a joyous, heartfelt time of worship.
I loved this...just beautiful.
Nice take on the topic. Such a heartwarming and touching piece - it truly warmed my soul. Great job!
Oh, this is great! I liked how it became a happy time, even though bittersweet. THe touch with brushing her long hair at night was something that made this real and special at the same time. Great job! ^_^
Wonderful, heartfelt story. Very well written. It's a nice reminder of what we have to look forward to after this life. Thanks for sharing
Absolutely beautiful, well done, thanks for the emotions.
Lovely story--this would be a comfort to others in a similar situation.
You have such an amazing writing ability. The letter is what really got to me. Wow...

I want to live a full life on this Earth, but to get to be with Jesus someday? It's what keeps me going each day.

Thank you for blessing me with this one.