The Official Writing Challenge
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03/08/08
Very good, personally I want to come thru as pure gold.:) Keep up the good work!
03/08/08
An educational read - in which I learned things I didn't know. I loved your last line...I will be silver, and yes, you'll be walking on gold streets and have a diamond in your crown, too! Such a great silver lining to look forward to if we are patient...and stand the test! Very nice, and written extremely well! A really enjoyable descriptive and creative read.
03/08/08
Very creative analogy, described very vividly. I enjoyed this piece.
Very nice, educational analogy.

One suggestion: I think I would have started with the line "Years ago there was a country song..." That got me to sit up (Okay, okay, I'm from Texas and like country music), but really it's because it was more personal. I liked the personal part more than the educational parts, but that may just be me.

This is very well written and clear. Nice devotional!