The Official Writing Challenge
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03/08/08
A great imagination! But I kept looking for the silver lining after the black cloud. Perhaps it's there, but I just couldn't pinpoint it . Creative, unique and yes, I did imagine right along with the 13 year old boy...and on second thought - I guess I found the silver lining in the promise not to run away again. Nicely done.
03/08/08
I love the voice of this. I was engaged throughout. Nice writing.
What a very clever title! I
"imagine" the silver lining is he realized how great home was after being gone a night. This begs to be read out loud. The repitition of "imagine" really can engage the listner. I think this would also work very well in 1st person, where we could really get into the "runaways" thoughts and mind. Just a suggestion, but you kept my attention the entire time. Nice job.