The Official Writing Challenge
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This was a captivating reminiscence, and a great example of the topic.

One tiny question? Who was looking over the newspaper?
03/07/08
Very vivid writing, and full of suspense. I was completely engrossed. Wonderful writing.
03/08/08
A good read, a couple of choppy places but overall good.
03/08/08
It seemed as if one whole sentence was missing - about a newspaper; however, after that I got into the story and the family's fear, strength and togetherness. Great ending...and so touching. Keep up the good work.
03/09/08
Good story with vivid descriptions. A few typos(wailing and nowhere) that are easily corrected. Keep writing.
03/11/08
Very intense story! Nice job!