The Official Writing Challenge
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03/07/08
Your descriptions are so vivid and engaging. I'm not a football fan, but I found myself sitting on the edge of my seat throughout - and I LOVE how you ended it. VERY good.
03/09/08
Great story with vivid descriptions. Keep writing.
03/11/08
You brought me right into the action and I LOVED the ending! Awesome job!
03/16/08
Aside from the fact that I LOVE football, this was awesome, with a great twist. Congrats on your well deserved ribbon!