The Official Writing Challenge
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03/07/08
What a lovely, lovely story! I was engaged from beginning to end.

A little attention to grammar and punctuation, and breaking your paragraphs into smaller ones, would make this entry a bit easier to read.

What a wonderful message - I truly enjoyed this.
03/10/08
Very creative and on the topic. I agree, more paragraphs and attention to punctuation would make this good story even better. I enjoyed reading this one.
03/11/08
Such a sweet moving story! Good job.