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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 2 – Intermediate)
Topic: Easter (05/30/05)

TITLE: Diary Entry - Easter Friday - Joseph of Arimathea
By David Ritchie


Although my heart is breaking at what my people have done, in myself I feel at peace. In fact I feel better than I have felt for a long time. This has been the most significant day of my whole life and I need to write it down.

I don’t know what I expected for I had real hope in him; somehow I felt there would still be life although I had seen with my own eyes that he was dead. I have never touched a dead person until tonight but without doubt he is dead. Nicodemus and I had real problems getting him off that cross, we were so careful with him for even though he was dead, we did not want to add to the damage already inflicted on his body. It was so mutilated there was hardly any whole skin left, and what there was felt so clammy. I have just finished washing the blood from my own body and I am waiting for the Sabbath to pass before I wash his blood from my clothes.

Even as I begged Pilate for his body my whole being was shaking inside, I could not believe what I was doing, but something inside just urged me on. As children mother had taught us to respect God, and in my heart I knew that this Jesus was a man sent from God. I longed to follow him and be with him and his disciples, but the Pharisees would have excommunicated me so I kept away.

For three years I have loathed myself for being such a coward, but tonight, oh it feels good, tonight, when everyone else had deserted him, I begged his body from Pilate and along with Nicodemus we buried him in the tomb I had bought for our family. I am ashamed that I never took him to my house while he was alive, he always hung around with poor people and sinners, but at least now in his death he is lying in a rich man’s tomb, my tomb. I still cannot believe it, Nicodemus and me, two cowardly Pharisees throughout his life; now in his death we were the only ones to take him from that cross. I had expected to meet Peter or James or John, but like all the rest they kept their distance, and rightly so, for my colleagues would have killed them too had they got their hands on them tonight.

One part of me feels so at peace, yet when I remember his body tears and heartbreak overwhelm me. I have never felt so extreme opposing emotions within me in my whole life. His body was so disfigured, raw flesh and broken skin mingling into one, how could men inflict such cruelty on another man? Those whips; he was barely recognisable, yet none of his bones were broken. Even the soldiers were surprised that he was dead but they checked it out so they did not have to break his legs in order for him to die before the Sabbath. I think one of our Prophets said that none of the Messiah’s bones would be broken; I need to check it out.

I can hardly believe I touched those hands that fed the multitudes, healed the lepers; they were nailed to that rough wooden cross. My hands are so sore from removing that crown of thorns, how cruel! My mind is still awhirl with all scenes of tonight. I did not hear all he said from the cross, as I was a little way off, but when he said, “It is finished,” something came alive in me. I knew exactly what I had to do and I have done it well. When Nicodemus and I stood at the door of the tomb, we could not take our eyes off him as he lay where we had placed him. It was a place of serenity we looked in wonder and amazement, gone was the mob, no cursing soldiers taking other bodies from other crosses, just Jesus, Nicodemus and myself. Eventually we sealed the tomb as Sabbath was almost on us but somehow something within me tells me it is not over yet, we will here more of what happened here tonight.

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Delores Baber06/06/05
Wonderful! I felt the dialogue was being directed to me, as though I was a scribe. I could picture the emotions that crossed his face, from sorrow to wonder. Great job!!!
Jan Ackerson 06/06/05
Lovely, lovely piece of writing.
Kathy Ellis06/06/05
unique point of view..very good
Leticia Caroccio06/07/05
What a creative piece of writing. You depicted this mysterious man's perspective quite well. I felt his pride and his remorse. I enjoyed reading this one very much. Very nicely done.
Shari Armstrong 06/07/05
Very powerful! It's nice to see how he might have felt.
dub W06/08/05
I like this POV, could very well be an introit to a musical or even a longer manuscript.
Amy Verlennich06/08/05
I especially LOVED the last paragraph! I got chills... wonderful point of view! Thank you!
Phyllis Inniss06/09/05
You made this scene come alive as you described the emotions of Joseph. This was beautifully done.
Michelle Burkhardt06/11/05
I noticed only a few spelling and grammer errors. (here should be hear) I had to re-read a few sentences to understand but I loved the first person view from Joseph's eyes. I would love to see his take on Easter. Nicely done.
Peggy Yengling06/11/05
POWERFUL... it causes the reader to pause and reflect and 'feel' the emotions of that earth-shattering day! I agree that the last paragraph is particularly excellent!
Joyce Simoneaux06/12/05
Very good and moving article. Very well written.
Deborah Porter 02/08/06
David, this is excellent, and would be a perfect inclusion in the April Issue of FaithWriters' Magazine. Would you allow us to use it?

Could you send me a private message and let me know if that would be okay. If it is, I'll need a short bio note to go with it. It's ideal for the season.

Look forward to hearing from you.

With love, Deb (Editor, FaithWriters' Magazine and Challenge Coordinator)