The Official Writing Challenge
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This is truly beautiful! I love your descriptions. Thanks for sharing this experience. I have never suffered in this way and hope if I ever do I will see the love, as you have...even if it's in "indsight"
You definitely have a way with words - you portrayed your struggle SO vividly. Lovely entry, with much truth. God bless!
Very good descriptive writing, thanks for the entry.
I had to read it twice. If only we could all learn this lesson too, to bring us through the really difficult pains of life.
Beautifully written, inspiring, well-crafted! Excellent job!
Amazing, wonderful insight. The word made flesh.
This was so beautiful...I loved the line,"...holds them all like the snow holds white." Geez, that's good writing. Congratulations on your 'highly commended' deserve it!