The Official Writing Challenge
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This is truly beautiful! I love your descriptions. Thanks for sharing this experience. I have never suffered in this way and hope if I ever do I will see the love, as you have...even if it's in "indsight"
03/07/08
You definitely have a way with words - you portrayed your struggle SO vividly. Lovely entry, with much truth. God bless!
03/08/08
Very good descriptive writing, thanks for the entry.
I had to read it twice. If only we could all learn this lesson too, to bring us through the really difficult pains of life.
03/11/08
Beautifully written, inspiring, well-crafted! Excellent job!
03/11/08
Amazing, wonderful insight. The word made flesh.
03/16/08
This was so beautiful...I loved the line,"...holds them all like the snow holds white." Geez, that's good writing. Congratulations on your 'highly commended'...you deserve it!