The Official Writing Challenge
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03/06/08
I love the hope in this. You did a wonderful job of setting the scene for us - your descriptions are very vivid. I felt like I was right there. Wonderfully done.
03/11/08
Very nice job! Good writing. I enjoyed the descriptions.
03/12/08
I found a couple of very minor grammatical items, but I must say I've forgotten them due to your creativity. You had me smiling at the author's wit while reading this.