The Official Writing Challenge
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How wonderful to hear such a great story of love and giving.
02/29/08
Good examples of giving! It's easy and convenient to tell people, "I'll pray for you..." or "I'll pray about it..." But we breathe life into our faith by acting on it. Give and it shall be given unto you... The key is to actually give.
03/01/08
A nice story that has a good take on our "Actions" topic; however, (Critique)...too many "unnecessary's" bogging down the flow. Tightening up the story line would improve the Reader's interest. Otherwise, well done.
03/01/08
Very moving story and testimony of true givers in your church, and the body of Christ. Thanks for sharing it!
03/01/08
Wonderful little vignettes of love in action.
If this is a true story, you must have a REALLY GREAT church. :) If it's fictional, it's something for us all to aspire to.